my new voice

so im watching Russell Simmons: Brave New Voices on HBO and it brought me back to my poetry days. check it out. give me feedback

"My Quest of Lov?"

i fuckin love the way
we communicate
the way we touch
like the sun ray beams upon us
the bond between us is so real
realer that artifacts that prove the facts
that people were here before us
and that prove that us
are people of people
and people that love
a love the conquers all
with the negative energies
that overjoys the energies
that make us moan
sometimes groan
than when were grown
we can be like the people
that came before us
so that we can love the world
like i love my other
other soul that finds the spaces between my hands
the lines that crosses like jesus
so i pray
i pray
i pray that we can love each other forever
that maybe one day i grow old and forget this love
and i can fall in love with love again
on that notebook shit
that these words live up to 365 letters that he wrote for her
i just love her
like common loved hiphop
like sanaa loved basketball
like my soul loves my family
i just love everything
and when love isnt there
i am not there
so as you see me walk
i am lovin
lovin
lovin....you.

may 29, 2009
1:13am